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【雅思托福写作】地图类型考题解析与高分范文

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实例一:

一个名为Islip的地方的town center的现在与将来


高分范文:(中括号内为解析!

【写作思路核心:两个时间点上的样子的比较不要先写第一张图,再写第二张图,而是拿第二张图去对比第一张图】

【Introduction】

The two maps illustrate a comparison between the future and the present layout of Islip town center.

【Body – Para. 1】

The most noticeable change is that a dual carriage way 【遇到名词的时候,考虑有没有修饰/补充信息的可能性:同位语、从句、动词分词、形容词短语等形式】, a loop that contains most of the town center’s facilities, will be built as a replacement of the current main road 【遇到名词的时候,考虑有没有修饰/补充信息的可能性:同位语、从句、动词分词、形容词短语等形式】, a straight west-east way going through the town center. 【Grammatical Range: 主系表结构、表语从句、同位语、定语从句、动词分词作后置定语】 The school and residential area outside the loop will remain south of it.

【Body – Para. 2】

【忌讳:过分描述每个建筑物的详细位置/占地/数量】 Changes will also happen to the core of the town center. It is most noteworthy that the shops on the north side of the present main road will be removed, and the land will be redeveloped with a bus station, a shopping center, a car park and a new housing area built as replacements of the shops. 【Grammatical Range: 主系表结构、主语从句、介词短语作状语】Meanwhile, the main road will prohibit all vehicles. Also, the plan affects 【不对动词否定,而对名词否定】 neither the location nor the number of the shops on the south side of the main road, while the eastern part of the current housing area will be revamped. In addition, the park will stay where it is but with a shrinkage.

【where引导的三种成分:

1) 定语:This is the place where I was born.

2) 名词:This is where I eat.

3) 状语:It will stay where it is.】

【Conclusion】

Overall, the town center of Islip,according to the development plan, will be more complex and multi-functional.


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